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The Eye of the Storm

As passion seems to rise from fear,
The fear of throwing in a gaze,
I'm stealing now the truth so near
To the forbidden end you praise.

Completion of the vicious circle,
It strangles me as blood is leaving now my face.
The quest of finding any mortal
That cannot leave this earth without a trace.

I'm touching ground and walking blind
With no more sins now left to mourn.
No path ahead,no path behind,
A traveller inside the storm.
Another brave and highly useless attempt of describing life.

Hope you enjoy it anyway.
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sabbyns1488 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2005
Hmm, the path may mean the impossibility of predicting the future or changing the past. As for the poem, the last part is just so true (depressing maybe, but true). There are some parts, though, in the first six lines that i can't really understand. Lines three and four are particulary ambiguous to me. Maybe it's a tense or a punctuation error.
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missChristina Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2005
there's always a path...as long as you still got you're feet to walk you along it...cam dezolante ultimele doua versuri.wb ! :D
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satanicmilkshake Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2005
I really like that, good choice of words.
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